我的中国缘之中国记忆
[投稿作品]   来自: 胡语萌 [美国匹兹堡中文学校]   
2018/05/15 09:36:56
已收到的印象
言简意赅13
文风幽默6
寓意深刻2
文笔流畅12
博学多才5
YaBoiLiu 2018/7/22 16:47:29 回应: 0

The writing piece was really good.  I like how you added examples of china why you like it.  Your parents are Chinese, you are a dragon sender or something like that.  Im really sorry that your uncle died when you were 5.  In general it was really good.